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goldenrod
08-29-2008, 12:24 PM
The Real Thing!


She took me on the merry-go-round
then a roller-coaster ride.
Not at a carnival,
the real thing!

Had me so high and then,
way down so low,
my nose bleeds used up
a ton of kleenex!

She laughed, I cried.
A total reversal of positions!
I was the one left,
grasping for the brass ring.

She, ended up,
keeping the real thing!

goldenrod.

Justin Rockwell
08-31-2008, 07:38 PM
Ha ha, I like the approach, but the wording/phrasing is a bit generic and elementary.

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