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aBIGsheep
08-27-2008, 08:25 PM
Ernest Hemingway was once prodded to compose a complete story in six words. His answer, personally felt to be his best prose ever, was:
"For sale: baby shoes, never used."
Some people say it was to settle a bar bet. Others say it was a personal challenge directed at other famous authors.
Now its your turn. I'll go first.
Black hair. Black skin. Blue eyes.
Hand over heart, I yell, "Jihad!
My head hurts. Get it out.
You have seven minutes. Do it.
Charles Darnay
08-27-2008, 08:47 PM
Ah to be young again....again
white camellia
08-28-2008, 03:18 AM
Don't believe in ghosts! - Mr. Ghost
InspireMe
08-28-2008, 03:36 AM
I realized it would never end.
white camellia
08-28-2008, 03:53 AM
I realized I'd never realized it.
Sunflower
08-28-2008, 05:43 AM
man meets woman, crush, boom, bang!
Judas130
08-28-2008, 08:12 AM
man meets woman, crush, boom, bang!
:lol:
Charles Darnay
08-28-2008, 01:08 PM
Twelve children, enough food for five
aBIGsheep
08-28-2008, 06:33 PM
Please! I have three children! Bang.
Sarasvati21
08-29-2008, 12:00 AM
So many hearts too painfully separate.
wilbur lim
08-29-2008, 08:11 AM
My world is berserk,literally dead.
HamOnRye
08-29-2008, 08:57 AM
This necktie is but a noose.
HerGuardian
08-29-2008, 09:24 AM
All that was just a dream! :d
Scheherazade
08-29-2008, 09:55 AM
He comes; she cares; he leaves.
white camellia
08-29-2008, 10:16 AM
Divorced and married; divorced; married; divorced.
Scheherazade
08-29-2008, 10:23 AM
Married, married, married, married and jailed.
white camellia
08-29-2008, 10:28 AM
Married, married, married, married and jailed.
Oh, man. :brow:
Stay in my dreams, stay, stay!
Scheherazade
08-29-2008, 10:41 AM
"Stay," pleads she, offering him arsenic.
RebeccaKate
08-29-2008, 02:46 PM
"Evil words slash deeper than daggers."
^^ Kay, that was a pathetic attempt. :sick:
aBIGsheep
08-29-2008, 05:40 PM
Shut up. All your stories suck.
Directed to none but myself of course
:D
InspireMe
08-29-2008, 10:48 PM
I forget why... aahh, forget it.
Charles Darnay
08-30-2008, 11:47 AM
The world explained in seven words....
aBIGsheep
08-30-2008, 06:37 PM
I'm good, obedient and I'm ignored.
white camellia
08-31-2008, 02:25 AM
There is a mislaid western soul.
V.Jayalakshmi
08-31-2008, 08:33 AM
Dear Members,
Wow! This idea is great.But six word,is it not?Why was then there were more words by some writers?Here I go with mine.
He enjoyed,night and day.Now in hospital.
aBIGsheep
09-01-2008, 05:40 PM
You shouldn't read this. Just run.
Within Me
09-01-2008, 07:02 PM
chose to deam..did, but .. failed !
Zippy
09-02-2008, 06:35 AM
Cut deep and bleeding, Richard slept.
Scheherazade
09-02-2008, 06:39 AM
One more vote it all takes... (http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=36922)
PabloQ
09-04-2008, 11:52 AM
The truth, discovered, lies secret forever.
Silven
09-04-2008, 09:58 PM
Small existence... no regret - but fret
Silven
09-04-2008, 10:00 PM
Cut deep and bleeding, Richard slept.
This is a great one! :)
aBIGsheep
09-04-2008, 10:35 PM
I never learned how to count numbers.
Vincent Black
09-05-2008, 10:53 AM
This one's entitled "Agatha Christie rides again":
Oh fain, death on a train.
qimissung
09-05-2008, 11:33 PM
"Are we going to make it?"
rtc143
09-06-2008, 10:55 AM
Child weeps, mother fears, father enjoys.
aBIGsheep
09-07-2008, 02:22 PM
My heart is a black abyss.
:D
idiosynchrissy
09-07-2008, 02:56 PM
I actually had to write a six word story for entrance into my advanced creative writing class in college. Here was the one I submitted:
You're dead to me now. Amen.
aBIGsheep
09-07-2008, 04:35 PM
I actually had to write a six word story for entrance into my advanced creative writing class in college. Here was the one I submitted:
You're dead to me now. Amen.
Snap son. I like that one, I like it a lot.
Dark Muse
09-08-2008, 10:32 PM
I have a journal with a collection of these that I write now and than for fun. Well here is one of my newest.
We sold piranhas in the park.
mercymyqueen
09-09-2008, 12:23 AM
The golden calf delayed not Jerusalem
Never more uneasy as in grace.
We all fall down. Shoot now.
Niamh
09-09-2008, 05:04 AM
she looks, but story is unread....
aBIGsheep
09-09-2008, 07:37 AM
Rend Flesh! I stop for puppies.
KyleBennett
09-09-2008, 12:41 PM
Alas, with adamantine chains concupiscence reigns.
poetman
09-10-2008, 04:56 PM
the best thing in life is...
aBIGsheep
09-13-2008, 01:28 AM
Tense. People standing. Gasps. Screams. GOALLL!!!
Countess
09-14-2008, 05:18 PM
I came; I saw; I died.
amanda_isabel
09-15-2008, 02:26 AM
i died and they saw it
aBIGsheep
09-21-2008, 09:53 AM
Everyone's a good winner. Losing? pfffttt.
Sunglow
09-21-2008, 11:14 AM
The tree fell on the house.
Sunglow
09-21-2008, 11:17 AM
A river poured from the sky.
Sunglow
09-21-2008, 11:20 AM
Mild wind blowed away the house.
Sunglow
09-21-2008, 11:27 AM
He didn't answer the red telephone.
muazjalil
09-21-2008, 01:03 PM
Why even try, It is Impossible!!
mercymyqueen
09-21-2008, 03:21 PM
His hands felt dead, lips moving.
aBIGsheep
09-22-2008, 10:29 PM
"Are you dead?" He didn't reply.
Cellar Door
09-23-2008, 10:59 PM
Dying men look in my eyes
Cellar Door
09-23-2008, 11:00 PM
You sold me false love, devil.
wilbur lim
09-24-2008, 09:58 AM
He fainted and there,genuinely dead.
aBIGsheep
09-24-2008, 09:56 PM
Man, I hate stories of death
mona amon
09-24-2008, 10:18 PM
Met, and lived happily ever after.
(I like stories with happy endings :D )
FactfromFake
10-09-2008, 11:47 PM
The blue crystal eyes lost their shine.
Epistemophile
10-09-2008, 11:53 PM
to be or not to be...
princesspoppi
10-10-2008, 12:01 AM
Awake or asleep? I am unsure.
Epistemophile
10-10-2008, 12:12 AM
Wolfeschlegelsteinhausenberger died of pneumonoultramicrosilicovolcanoconiosis. Dorawissenschaferflagersteinbach sighed.
mona amon
10-10-2008, 06:05 AM
ROFL, Epistemophile!!! :lol:
cdbitesky
10-12-2008, 01:43 AM
All dark. All quite. All dead.
princesspoppi
10-12-2008, 02:29 AM
The infant utters it's first cry.
amoral
10-14-2008, 04:32 AM
good good study, day day up!
princesspoppi
10-14-2008, 04:46 AM
beacon of hope falters, darkness reigns
jhonerliz
10-14-2008, 08:31 AM
I am me, you are you.
Captain_Kuchiki
10-14-2008, 05:34 PM
The moon shone like a lantern.
A snowflake falls slowly and gently.
It is time to party, bro!
caddy_caddy
10-15-2008, 01:33 PM
the shorter story :no love no glory
not mine
Midnight_Star
10-24-2008, 12:31 AM
Love of teaching makes learning adventuresst.
Collide with your enemies and allies.
Some things corrupt this buaetiful world.
Show me your powers Lord Jesus!
Your smiles make me joyfully happy.
This is really not that hard. :D
Do not cry o little child.
Looking for Gods summoned Angels.
So many faces filled with anger.
Every person is looking for more.
Who was I to make patience.
Far away for far to long.
Every man has a tale.
We are never by ourselves.
We need God every day.
We need to cry to God.
Babyguile
10-24-2008, 07:56 AM
Bunny from hole. Foxes patter. Dead.
Epistemophile
10-24-2008, 08:31 AM
is that lipstick on your cheek?
hoope
10-24-2008, 01:27 PM
Once lived in hope, now darkness
firewrathed
10-25-2008, 05:53 AM
Under every tree, her shadow weeps.
firewrathed
10-25-2008, 05:56 AM
They say it'll rain someday.
Sevencos
10-25-2008, 09:33 AM
you know....i know you don't.
pinkmoon
10-25-2008, 09:36 AM
life is nice, not all times.:)
Midnight_Star
10-25-2008, 08:47 PM
For the hearts of people dullen.
andave_ya
10-26-2008, 12:10 AM
The girl took a left instead.
djy78usa
10-26-2008, 12:19 AM
He pitched. I swung. Game over
JustNickey
10-26-2008, 02:05 PM
The cold light promised nothing but…
With a resolute push, she survived.
"I don’t know baby.", he lied.
Her charm hastened its shivering demise.
The salty elixir was mother’s milk.
It was all crap. I tried. :sick::lol:
Midnight_Star
10-29-2008, 03:23 PM
He put rocks in my socks.:D
kinggreywolf
11-06-2008, 10:39 PM
"Dont put that in your... gross"
lucidnightmares
11-08-2008, 10:51 PM
i still remember my last breath...
morganblalock
11-10-2008, 06:38 PM
Surely, it's not over.
It is.
adwara1
11-10-2008, 07:26 PM
He smiled, she blushed, God Blessed
AdoreroDio
11-10-2008, 07:52 PM
She entered. He perished. She left.
Never forward. Never back. Always central.
scarjo
11-10-2008, 10:04 PM
Jealous, misled husband kills innocent wife. (Aka Othello)
The dog died after its birth.
mtpspur
11-12-2008, 12:34 AM
Addled blogger runs out of stories.
mercymyqueen
11-12-2008, 02:22 AM
Hitler had a daughter? Am I...
Please don't look at me like that. Joan?
Don't tell me you lost it.
ok, that was bad =P
xtianfriborg13
11-25-2012, 07:37 PM
I saw the ending. It's now.
cacian
11-26-2012, 08:43 AM
I saw the word. It wrote.
tonywalt
11-26-2012, 10:01 AM
"Your'e Nice". Many wines. New Lovers.
DieterM
11-26-2012, 12:13 PM
He explained, "Now, a cliffhanger is …"
Calidore
11-26-2012, 04:19 PM
Learned. Sought. Found. Struggled. Collapsed. Understood.
cacian
11-27-2012, 05:33 AM
Nice he said. Now cool of.
Danik 2016
04-28-2017, 11:04 PM
6 words short story thread.
Silas Thorne
04-29-2017, 12:13 AM
One infected chicken, this world's end.
Silas Thorne
04-29-2017, 12:32 AM
Rejection: two theatre tickets, one seat empty.
Danik 2016
04-29-2017, 12:50 PM
Good stories, ST. The above would be yet more effective, IMO, if you took out the word "Rejection" leaving the interpretation to the reader.
Danik 2016
04-29-2017, 12:52 PM
One infected chicken, this world's end.
Rejection: two theatre tickets, one seat empty.
Good stories, ST. The above would be yet more effective, IMO, if you took out the word "Rejection" leaving the interpretation to the reader.
Danik 2016
04-29-2017, 12:54 PM
I came; I saw; I died.
I liked your ironical reversal of the famous Julius Cesar sentence.
YesNo
04-29-2017, 04:30 PM
I contribute 6 word stories to Nicola Auckland's weekly contest. She provides a prompt, organizes voting and announces winners. I have never won, but that's not why I participate: https://nicolaauckland.com/category/six-word-story-challenge/
Here are some of my entries:
Prompt: funny
Our guru rambled. We took notes.
Posted March 11, 2017
Prompt: temptation
That switch shuts it all down.
Posted March 22, 2017
Prompt: transgression
You didn’t think I would mind?
Posted March 25, 2017
Prompt: confusion
Which UFO did what to you?
Posted April 1, 2017
Prompt: awakening
He yawns, stretches. “Who are you?”
Posted April 8, 2017
Prompt: outcast
Even those idiots don’t want me.
Posted April 15, 2017
Prompt: leave
“I’m going to Mars!” (Good riddance.)
Posted April 22, 2017
Prompt: dare
What a chicken! Want to skydive?
Posted April 29, 2017
Danik 2016
04-29-2017, 08:02 PM
I liked best:
Prompt: transgression
You didn’t think I would mind?
Posted March 25, 2017
Prompt: confusion
Which UFO did what to you?
Posted April 1, 2017
Prompt: awakening
He yawns, stretches. “Who are you?”
Posted April 8, 2017
Prompt: outcast
Even those idiots don’t want me.
Posted April 15, 2017
Prompt: leave
“I’m going to Mars!” (Good riddance.)
Posted April 22, 2017
Danik 2016
04-29-2017, 08:04 PM
Wild waves washed away his anguish.
WhiteRabbit24
04-29-2017, 08:31 PM
He looks up - Et tu, Brute?
WhiteRabbit24
04-29-2017, 08:42 PM
The story is there's no story.
Silas Thorne
04-29-2017, 09:06 PM
Good stories, ST. The above would be yet more effective, IMO, if you took out the word "Rejection" leaving the interpretation to the reader.
Thanks, Danik. Good advice. 'Rejection' makes it seven words too. Doh!
So: Two theatre tickets, one seat empty.
Danik 2016
04-29-2017, 10:07 PM
I like it better that way.
Danik 2016
04-29-2017, 10:09 PM
The story is there's no story.
Lol! An anti story.
YesNo
04-30-2017, 08:31 AM
Rejection could be a title to your 6 word story, Silas Thorne. Although titles could become the story.
@WhiteRabbit "The story is there's no story." That might be the problem with six words stories in general.
@Danik "Wild waves washed away his anguish." This gets my imagination thinking of death and what the anguish might have been.
Danik 2016
04-30-2017, 08:47 AM
Good idea ST
Rejection could be a title to your 6 word story, Silas Thorne. Although titles could become the story.
I liked the idea of the title.
@WhiteRabbit "The story is there's no story." That might be the problem with six words stories in general.
I agree. 6 words is not enough.
@Danik "Wild waves washed away his anguish." This gets my imagination thinking of death and what the anguish might have been.
Yes, that´s the idea, Yes/No.
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