xemphnas poetry

[xemphnas1]

eyes of grey
shades of brown
what youh say
puts me down
subtle life
tarnished dreams
youh kept it all
coming to me
youh know my heart
I know you're face
ripping me apart
I stood in place
dying spirit
lack of thought
it all seems complex
atleast thats..what I thought

[lucidnightmares]

welcome to the boards xemphnas.
a great poem to show your talents, the first four lines are my favorites.
makes me think of someone in an abusive relationship or something to that extent.

not much else o say, put i am looking forward to more from you:thumbs_up

[CathyEarnshaw]

Nice flow you have here. Hope to see more!

[blazeofglory]

eyes of grey
shades of brown
what youh say
puts me down
subtle life
tarnished dreams
youh kept it all
coming to me
youh know my heart
I know you're face
ripping me apart
I stood in place
dying spirit
lack of thought
it all seems complex
atleast thats..what I thought

rhymed and chimerical.