Apoplexy

[Adolescent09]

Apoplexy

Something called Providence built this sole
Something called Progenitor gave it a home,
Something called innocence got locked in time
Something called Apoplexy was birthed in mind.

I took it out on Providence
He took away my Progenitor
Innocence is still lost in time
Apoplexy is still in my mind.

[CathyEarnshaw]

This is very sad. And it flows quite nicely.

[blazeofglory]

Apoplexy

Something called Providence built this sole
Something called Progenitor gave it a home,
Something called innocence got locked in time
Something called Apoplexy was birthed in mind.

I took it out on Providence
He took away my Progenitor
Innocence is still lost in time
Apoplexy is still in my mind.

A very saddening note! exquisiteness is what I can say for my comment!

[DanielBenoit]

Quite a strange and simple poem. The flow is unsettling, but in a good way. :thumbs_up