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Bruce Bradley
08-20-2008, 01:23 PM
Love Forever
By: Bruce Bradley

Everyone loves in their own way.
We pay no heed what others say.
In love our words can’t be fake.
To love the difference it makes.

Love will make you happy each day.
Giving your heart is the price to pay.
Love makes our heart beat and ache.
Love is better to give and not take.

Love is hard a game we play.
Can’t leave, it’s in us to stay.
That’s right, there’s no mistake.
Being in love is no piece of cake.

There will be a time someday
Your feelings are molded in clay
We marry knowing what is at stake
Finding love is fragile as a snowflake

Grasp it too tightly it will crumble
Lying will cause us to stumble
We must be honest and true
When in love nothing else will do

Be faithful it is easy to stray.
Stay strong and do not sway.
Tell them of your love everyday.
Love can make all things okay.

lit_head
08-20-2008, 06:46 PM
i liked that. My only criticism though is it kind of sounds like it should be on a Hallmark card. no offense, just my two cents. Great Work nonetheless

blazeofglory
09-11-2008, 12:18 PM
Love Forever
By: Bruce Bradley

Everyone loves in their own way.
We pay no heed what others say.
In love our words can’t be fake.
To love the difference it makes.

Love will make you happy each day.
Giving your heart is the price to pay.
Love makes our heart beat and ache.
Love is better to give and not take.

Love is hard a game we play.
Can’t leave, it’s in us to stay.
That’s right, there’s no mistake.
Being in love is no piece of cake.

There will be a time someday
Your feelings are molded in clay
We marry knowing what is at stake
Finding love is fragile as a snowflake

Grasp it too tightly it will crumble
Lying will cause us to stumble
We must be honest and true
When in love nothing else will do

Be faithful it is easy to stray.
Stay strong and do not sway.
Tell them of your love everyday.
Love can make all things okay.

A good picturesque of love. But this happens in idyllic moments not in everyday reality.