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birgitta_nell@y
08-20-2008, 01:19 PM
Locked, locked-
In a room tiled with mirrors;
Every glance of your eye catches your reflection:
A story bounding backwards through time
To mysterious spheres unknown.
Light! Oh, such light!
What shadows may be cast in this room:
Black and white memories gleam in your fading eyes,
As your mind travels away from the present
To a life long lived,
Now captured in a compilation of glass.
To swim through space and matter,
Feeling the icy chill of diamond stars;
Reflecting into the dark universe the sparkling colours of your mirrors;
Shine, shine on-
Spinning in a room tiled with mirrors.

qimissung
08-20-2008, 01:45 PM
You've created mysterious, lovely images.

Dark Muse
08-20-2008, 01:59 PM
Oh wow I really like this. Wonderful imagery

goldenrod
08-20-2008, 02:35 PM
You have obviously mastered the art of slow- glass gazing! Beautiful poem...

goldenrod.

whitman
08-20-2008, 03:07 PM
excellent multi-faceted poem like a room full of mirrors reflecting one another.