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lucidnightmares
08-19-2008, 05:19 PM
is it wrong to remember you
even though your still here
is it wrong to not need you
even though i love you so

is it wrong to forget so easily
even though you hold my heart
is it wrong to not feel empty
even though theres nothing inside

and i know i love you
but it is merely because you love me?
i know i want you
but is it because i`m tired of being lonely?

i can tell you all my secrets, all my fears
iv`e heard most of yours and already i forget
does that mean you mean nothing? that i`ll shed no tears?
i think that i will, i know i want to and yet....

i can live without you
and it hurts me so
from the beginning i knew
that you would leave, though i wouldn`t let it show...

i thought you meant everything
though i could let you walk away without a second thought
they say to love is it set free, but everyone seems to cling
did i know that this relationship would lead to naught?

i guess it doesn`t matter now does it?
because i suppose you knew too
was it your heart that you`d omit?
all for the sake of a first time, or is this untrue?

and after it all i can live without you
after it all i still have to admit
i don`t mind that we`ll soon be through
i hate it....

Dark Muse
08-19-2008, 05:41 PM
I love the truth in this poem, and it is very well written. An enjoyable read.

CathyEarnshaw
08-19-2008, 08:35 PM
Like Dark Muse said, this poem is very honest, saying the things we all feel but never speak to our partners. Nicely done.

qimissung
08-19-2008, 09:40 PM
So true-sometimes, subconsciously, we know this person isn't right for us, but the child in us longs for more. You did a good job of putting that into words without being saccharine-not an easy task, actually!

lucidnightmares
08-19-2008, 10:56 PM
thanks for the positive feedback guys:D
this really helps me deal with what i`m going through right now:thumbs_up

blazeofglory
09-11-2008, 12:11 PM
Something unpoured deeposted deep down finds here a good outlet through your beautiful poem