if only

[CdnReader]

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if only


if only
I knew where to find you
and could fly there
in an instant

if only
you could welcome me
with arms wide and heart open
as happy as I am
to be found

if only
we could make a space
in our worlds
a space in which we'd each fit
seamlessly

if only
I could know
that loving you would be enough

if only
you could know
that loving me would be enough

if only
time would stop
and swallow us up



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[Dark Muse]

Sad and romantic, this poem has a lot of feeling

[asilef73]

if only! :)

i love it.

[goldenrod]

If only...a sad, soft cry from the heart and soul.

Now I shall go to bed with a sigh...

goldenrod.

[ShadowFire]

My goodness. If only I could tell of the beauty and emotion I feel from this wonderful poem. Thank you.

[white camellia]

I think we could make a song with the poem. Nicely done!

[CdnReader]

Thanks so much for your comments, everyone! I appreciate you stopping by and taking the time to read. :)

[TheFifthElement]

You know, it occurred to me that this would be an excellent entry to Firefangled's litany competition in the form poem contest, but I'm not sure I want the competition! Emotionally packed poem Cdn, which benefits nicely from the repetition. Lovely :)

[CdnReader]

Thanks so much, Fifth. I really appreciate your reading and commenting. Honoured, in fact. :)