Looking for a final destination!

[formality hater]

Looking for a final destination!


Oh, you the one-lingering soul!
Is your search not over yet?
Are you done digging for truth?
Have you unravelled your secret?
Are your tears still soaking you,
Do those salty lumps persist?
Can you feel the darkness injuring you,
Are your thoughts wrecking a havoc?
Is that wounded bird you cherished,
Still dwells inside your heart's cage?
Do those people appear murky
Or your eyes have gone too wild?
Will you be as a wandering peddlar,
Till your destiny appears to you?
Or will you walk along the edge of time,
So that your journey lasts forever!
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Please, spare a few seconds to comment!

[Pendragon]

I love the sweet sadness of this one! :thumbs_up

[CathyEarnshaw]

You can really feel the passion and frustration behind this one!

[formality hater]

Thankyou Pendragon and CathyEarnshaw!

[Pensive]

I like how the sorrow hidden behind the curtain of these words affects me. Just one thing though:


Is that wounded bird you cherished,
Still dwells inside your heart's cage?

It might be better this way:

Is that wounded bird you cherished
Still dwelling inside your heart's cage?

[formality hater]

Thanx Pensive for your comments and suggestion.I feel adding "ing" sort of changes the meaning of the particular verse!

[paperleaves]

I agree with Pensive, and yet regardless, this passionate poem still thrills me. Congrats!