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goldenrod
08-18-2008, 12:29 PM
DARFUR...why does that ring a bell?


she would buy a ball,
but for lack of money...
so she makes do
with a rounded stone.

once sang and danced,
to entertain her mother
but now,
she cries softly,

all alone...

CathyEarnshaw
08-19-2008, 12:36 PM
I like the sound of this. Quite sad! Will you continue the story?

blazeofglory
09-11-2008, 12:14 PM
DARFUR...why does that ring a bell?


she would buy a ball,
but for lack of money...
so she makes do
with a rounded stone.

once sang and danced,
to entertain her mother
but now,
she cries softly,

all alone...

This poem wants to say something deep-seated feeling but recedes.