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tattooed wonder
08-16-2008, 01:41 AM
I hate love stories
I have always hated love stories
I even hated them when I was in love

Jesus it's like they all want you to feel inadequate...
like you are a ****ing loser
for not finding that person

Yeah? well, it's not like I don't want
to find that person
I just cant

I feel blind
lost
in a sea that threatens to swallow me

I need someone to ground me
someone to tether me

that is my one weakness
I need a man
to be happy

no matter how much time
I spend alone
I will always know

that I need someone
to come home to

Dark Muse
08-16-2008, 01:49 AM
This was so full of strong emotion, and bitterness and anger. I do agree with your sentiment upon Love stories, never been much of a fan myself there.

PrinceMyshkin
08-16-2008, 06:33 AM
The ironic turn in those last five lines makes this especially poignant.

goldenrod
08-16-2008, 02:23 PM
Couldn't agree with you more!

goldenrod.