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Dark Muse
08-15-2008, 11:14 PM
The Feel of You, Taste of You, Scent of You

Close to you
I feel your breath
warm; tantalizing

The scent of you
lingers in the air
the touch of you
a caress in the darkness

Your fingers lead me through
trusted wholly to you
flesh upon flesh
set aquiver and afire

The taste of you
upon my lips; my tongue
skin upon skin
you find all the right places

Falling into you
your thighs
hold me still
your heat radiates

Thrills ripple through my body
you know just where to kiss
each stroke
of tongue and fingers
awakening

My love, my lust
set me free
in the ways of love

Your body instructing mine
naked in sin
naked in innocence

Limbs wrapped up in each other
hushed words, whispered names
rhythm of two bodies
friction; heat; sweat
body to body
yours and mine.

PrinceMyshkin
08-16-2008, 06:39 AM
A good example of how poetry permits the private to become public!

goldenrod
08-16-2008, 02:20 PM
The poem could be used to raise temperatures everywhere...Talk about global warming!!!:)

Love making as the less fortunate imagine it to be...

goldenrod.

Dark Muse
08-16-2008, 06:36 PM
LOL, thank you

qimissung
08-17-2008, 03:07 AM
Good God, I broke out into a sweat just reading it! It's quite beautiful and evocative, Dark Muse!

Dark Muse
08-17-2008, 03:25 AM
Hahaha, thank you very much

Janine
08-17-2008, 03:32 AM
Dark Muse, Wow, I think you have been reading too many D.H.Lawrence stories. :lol:....But seriously, I did like it; the poem has great flow...I must admit I didn't expect this explicit a poem from you but it is very well expressed and I enjoyed reading it.

Dark Muse
08-17-2008, 03:35 AM
Yes I debated about posting it here, but I was really happy about how it came out, so I decided to go for it.