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John Gambitz
04-15-2008, 11:02 AM
The Existence of Othas, Namon, Midus and Pras

Once, there was nothing, not even a single scratch of life in this universe. There exist two forces which has no shape and no name. They have certain attractiveness and repulsiveness; as a result, they are close to a certain degree yet still have a single line gap between them.

Out of a sudden as there was no ‘time’, they tend to create everything with themselves. One of them tends to create the outer layer while another one creates the inner layer of everything they want to create. All with such details, they create the universe and everything in it.

Both of them are what we known as the ‘creator’. The one who creates the outer layer are known here as the ‘Othas’ and the inner creator are known ‘Namon’. After their creation of the universe, what Othas creates (the outer layer of everything) seems to be more significant to mortals, on the other hand what ‘Namon’ creates (the inner layer) is hidden below the outer layer. However, in between ‘Othas’ and ‘Namon’, there exists another force that acts as the line gap which is known as ‘Midus’. Its existence is to make sure the balance of both forces in everything. Within ‘Midus’, there is another element that controls the forces of attraction and repulsion, which is called ‘Pras’.

All four of the forces mentioned above exist to create a balance for the universe and everything in it.

This short story is to remind people of the existence of the inner and outer parts of everything. This world which is created in such a way that shows simplicity and complication is very beautiful. We have to appreciate it. There is no good or bad in things, the only thing is the way we see it and the way we act to it. We are it and it is us.

The Pras is within Us.

Written by
John Gambitz

IconicOne
08-15-2008, 01:34 AM
whatever you did with that story, you did it right! cus when i read it,man, the way the one guy describes the pleasure in death, just hit me like a ton of bricks.:D

Mortdefides
08-15-2008, 09:51 AM
It most definitely was interesting. The funny thing is that I have written something really similar to this one. It is about the creation of the world. I also have two powers but they're called Magnut and Valknut. In my story there lots of elements which are taken from the Norse mythology - you should read something about it, it really has a lot of interesting stuff. You may visit Wikipedia (http://en.wikipedia.org) and search for "Norse mythology". I can assure you that it will give you a lot of more and fresh ideas.