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whitman
08-14-2008, 02:15 AM
A dead whale crossed the earth,
guided by the dark bells
in the cathedrals of gravity on fire.
He passed through me on a bridge
built from the ashes of a dream.

I rebuilt the whale from the glass
echo of his song and became
his passenger journeying
through the seas,a harpoon
broke us into fragments,scattering
us across the seabed.

PrinceMyshkin
08-14-2008, 09:36 AM
What an extraordinary vision!

Dark Muse
08-14-2008, 11:55 AM
This is beautiful with such wonderful imagery

blazeofglory
08-14-2008, 01:09 PM
Yes the imagination is deep and profound.

whitman
08-14-2008, 01:21 PM
thank you everyone.

firefangled
08-14-2008, 05:31 PM
This is amazing and the images so strong that I didn't want it to end so soon.

Well done again.