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Dark Muse
08-13-2008, 08:56 PM
Soul Rhythm

I feel the internal hum
moving through my blood
like the Taos;
a vibration on every bone,

Speaking to me in depths
that are not words;
upon the surface
it disappears,

But carried within
the bass beat plays,
a song of the soul
never understood
by human ears,

It has no language
and cannot speak
but it strums
through the nerves;

A spasm of sound
that will not break;
a voice that is mute
and has no mouth,

But far from silent
it calls through the marrow
and twangs with the tendons
and veins.

qimissung
08-13-2008, 09:03 PM
That's a good poem, Dark Muse. I like the metaphor and the way you described the music within.

Dark Muse
08-13-2008, 09:19 PM
Thank you

goldenrod
08-14-2008, 12:22 PM
Lovely poem! Perhaps the soul is picking up, and translating, the silent vibrations radiating from the music of the spheres?


goldenrod.

Dark Muse
08-14-2008, 12:25 PM
Thank you, that makes me think of something someone told me once. He said that the stars sing, I guess they make this sort of vibration

blazeofglory
09-11-2008, 12:21 PM
Soul Rhythm

I feel the internal hum
moving through my blood
like the Taos;
a vibration on every bone,

Speaking to me in depths
that are not words;
upon the surface
it disappears,

But carried within
the bass beat plays,
a song of the soul
never understood
by human ears,

It has no language
and cannot speak
but it strums
through the nerves;

A spasm of sound
that will not break;
a voice that is mute
and has no mouth,

But far from silent
it calls through the marrow
and twangs with the tendons
and veins.

It got ,me into rhytms