Aborted

[Dark Muse]

Aborted

Emptied--
a drum hollowed out
lost of sound
sealed closed

Emptied--
a vessel unearthed
old bones
dead eyes

Emptied--
a pysanky egg
blown glass
winter wind
all the same

Emptied--
stale plates
flattened out
drifting away

Emptied--
just a shell
a ball of air
dissected
rejected

Emptied--
no more words
no more thoughts
not a sound

Emptied--
silenced
with a dull thunk
echo in the mind

[Niamh]

Emptied--
silenced
with a dull thunk
echo in the mind

I really like this last bit Dark Muse.:)

[Dark Muse]

Thank you

[Janine]

That is excellent Dark Muse! Keep them coming....

[Dark Muse]

Thank you very much

[goldenrod]

You certainly lived up to your name with this one! Dark and brooding, still searching for more hidden nuance...me that is!


goldenrod.