Oubliette (your thoughts)

[wagravity]

One road
Last toke
A friend I've known
For, So long ago

One lane
Fast paced
Think hard, white laced
It's too hard for me to think straight

One night
H*I*G*H*L*I*G*H*T
AMBULANCE vs. SUICIDE
Eyes are crying, straps are tight

One death
Last breath
A mother wept, my secrets kept
Nothing's left, an oubliette

[Sweets America]

I like this! :thumbs_up The way the words sound, the rhythm. I'm not sure I have a good understanding of what it tells, but I like how I hear it.

[symphony]

I like it too. The lines come brisk and detached, and then adds up to a lovely poem. I didnt get why that space between the last and second last stanza though.