When you fall, you get up

[AimusSage]

WHEN YOU FALL, YOU GET UP

When you fall, you get up
If you fall again, you get up again
Yet with every fall you loose something
Every time you fall a little further
Every time it becomes harder to get up
How many times must you fall?
When will it end?
Do you even want to get up again?
You have to
There is no choice
Be prepared to fall again
But hope you’ll stand
That this one was the last
Of your tumbles

[TheFifthElement]

You know Aimus, this reminded me of something but for the life of me I can't think what. I liked this, profound but not showy.

[~rose.of.night]

very profound. i like the repetition, and the way you separated the lines. good job

[blazeofglory]

WHEN YOU FALL, YOU GET UP

When you fall, you get up
If you fall again, you get up again
Yet with every fall you loose something
Every time you fall a little further
Every time it becomes harder to get up
How many times must you fall?
When will it end?
Do you even want to get up again?
You have to
There is no choice
Be prepared to fall again
But hope you’ll stand
That this one was the last
Of your tumbles


This has a reality quotient. Something serious said in a simple tone!