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goldenrod
08-05-2008, 12:51 PM
Trying a new approach to an age-old situation!?


Light Hearted Rendezvous!

Light of heart
days work done,
going out
to have some fun!

Leaving all
my cares behind...
Will dine,
Italian pasta;
bottle of wine!

A lady fair,
beyond compare!
All decked out,
will meet me there!

Graceful supping,
soulful stare.
Candles flicker,
love to share!

Ring in pocket,
finger bound?
If, yes!
the answer...

My true-love found!!!


goldenrod.

Dark Muse
08-05-2008, 05:14 PM
I really like this. It was very sweet and romantic

MorpheusSandman
08-05-2008, 05:16 PM
Yes, sweet and romantic, the exact adjectives I was looking for!

blazeofglory
08-05-2008, 09:10 PM
Trying a new approach to an age-old situation!?


Light Hearted Rendezvous!

Light of heart
days work done,
going out
to have some fun!

Leaving all
my cares behind...
Will dine,
Italian pasta;
bottle of wine!

A lady fair,
beyond compare!
All decked out,
will meet me there!

Graceful supping,
soulful stare.
Candles flicker,
love to share!

Ring in pocket,
finger bound?
If, yes!
the answer...

My true-love found!!!


goldenrod.

This is fabulous, enigmatic and shocking. You really incarnadined the thing of love into the lines of the poem.