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goldenrod
08-04-2008, 10:37 AM
I am a Rainbow!"


The colour is blue
for an ache or a pain,
when first I slip my counterpane.

Red for malignant pressure high,
when first it reaches
for the
sky.

Green, the tablet
I unfold,
for treatment of the common cold.

Purple?
can't remember
what that's for.
No matter,
I've dropped
and lost it
on the
floor!

I have more colours,
quite a few.
I am a rainbow!

Well...unwell...that is true!


goldenrod.

Dark Muse
08-04-2008, 11:44 AM
Oh I really like this. I love how you went through each of the colors, and I thought the ending was amusing

romantic novel
08-04-2008, 03:40 PM
Red for malignant pressure high,
when first it reaches
for the
sky.





Wow...very wonderful lines..I like those most..they are really expressive..