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dibyendra
08-04-2008, 01:46 AM
Your face,
filled with different emotions,
in the dim light, still depicts
every line on your face.

You might feel unnoticed
while you're drinking alone
with a cigarette in your hand
in the crowded bar.

But, someone is beholding you
closely, whenever you are around.
Your every move, every breathe
that you take, sensationalizes someone.

When your face glows with joy,
someone gets rapturous than you.
Because, someone truly wish to see
that glow in your face forever.

Your eyes, sometimes, get sparkled
from the tears. yet, you hide
them from the light and you walk out
from the bar, feeling lonely, taking off
your coat, and loosing your tie. And, you
light another cigarette, still feeling unnoticed.

Look back, sometimes, then you'll see
the one who loves you earnestly,
who follows you just like a shadow,
and is really desperate to get your company.

Dark Muse
08-04-2008, 02:06 AM
This is really sweet, or about a stalker. But either way nicely written, and I always like poems, that leave me unusure if I should be moved, or creeped out.

dibyendra
08-04-2008, 11:06 PM
Thanks, Dark Muse, for your comment.

goldenrod
08-05-2008, 12:37 PM
I think there is a diffidence in the remarks of the observer which precludes "stalking." Like the mood set and the set-up for more than one possible outcome.

goldenrod.

blazeofglory
08-05-2008, 10:07 PM
Your face,
filled with different emotions,
in the dim light, still depicts
every line on your face.

You might feel unnoticed
while you're drinking alone
with a cigarette in your hand
in the crowded bar.

But, someone is beholding you
closely, whenever you are around.
Your every move, every breathe
that you take, sensationalizes someone.

When your face glows with joy,
someone gets rapturous than you.
Because, someone truly wish to see
that glow in your face forever.

Your eyes, sometimes, get sparkled
from the tears. yet, you hide
them from the light and you walk out
from the bar, feeling lonely, taking off
your coat, and loosing your tie. And, you
light another cigarette, still feeling unnoticed.

Look back, sometimes, and you'll see
the one who loves you earnestly,
and follows you just like a shadow,
and is really desperate to get your company.

Really, Dib?

Xcape
08-06-2008, 09:18 PM
But, someone is beholding you
closely, whenever you are around.
Your every move, every breathe
that you take, sensationalizes someone.

Lovely sentiments in this stanza.

dibyendra
08-07-2008, 08:44 AM
Really, Dib?

Thanks, Blaze for the query. :)
In reality, there's always someone beholding you, but might not always be true. I have tried to portray someone's sentiments here and about the stalker who loves that person desperately.

dibyendra
08-07-2008, 08:45 AM
Lovely sentiments in this stanza.

Thanks, Xcape for your comment.