"fever!"

[goldenrod]

"fever!"


I died last night!
Am looking forward to dying again, tonight, with... Anticipation!

The multiple thrills, heart stopping!
The physical pain, tingling and...
Exquisite!

We are a doomed pair when entwined.
Executioner and Executioner.
An intimate, double suicide...
Dissipating heat!


goldenrod

[Sweets America]

Damn, I love this too! I recognize your voice, strangely, the tone and exclamation marks, the lively feeling. That was a very good depiction of love-making, and I liked how it came by surprise (no pun intended) in the last stanza. I didn't see it coming but I am quite naive at times.
I think I did not pay enough attention to your poetry, that is a shame!

[Dark Muse]

This was interesting, but I rather liked it