A buried treasure in Bahrain.

[Amylian]

Hey,

Well, since this section is for posting personal poetry, I have decided to post mine. To tell the truth, I have no idea what a true poetry is, howeve, this is my first try.
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Due to Future plans, I have deleted it...

[lucidnightmares]

loved the ending.
really like the poem, read it a few times over, i can`t help but wonder if the seeker will be immortalized in the minds of others, it is in mine:thumbs_up

[Amylian]

Thanks Lucid for commenting...

So you think he will be immortalized? well yes, in my heart he really will be. But you see, what kind of immortality is this that derived you from your rights as a human being? even your own hair is dying and only few left for you to enjoy the rest of your life.

[dibyendra]

It's like storytelling for me rather than poetry. Yes, like Lucid said, I loved the ending as well.

[Amylian]

It's like storytelling for me rather than poetry. Yes, like Lucid said, I loved the ending as well.

Yep, it is called a "prose poetry" which sometimes becomes indistinguishable; whether it is a poem or a short short story. See Wikipedia.

As for the ending, I am glad that you liked it; that was my intention.