Waterdrop

[soloIQ]

Hello waterdrop
on the roam.
must be searching
for your home.

Move out waterdrop
through a pipe,
down the drain,
safe from wipe.

Press on waterdrop
heats no fun.
Don't get left out
in the sun.

Brave little waterdrop
Lost some weight.
almost there,
past that gate.

Goodbye waterdrop,
found the sea.
slip on in
cease to be.

[Dark Muse]

I thought this was a cute charming poem. But I found a deeper meaning behind the simplicity

[goldenrod]

This one is another "HURRAH" for we'uns that like to use rhyme, regardless of all the challenge of its restrictions, now and again...:)


goldenrod.

[firefangled]

Very clever and well done.

[eyemaker]

I love this poem! very well-written..good job. ;)

[MorpheusSandman]

Simple, elegant, beautiful. But, as they say, still waters run deep.

[dibyendra]

I enjoyed reading this poem. :) Good poem!

[formality hater]

A very good poem!

[dibyendra]

Yes, indeed. I liked the rhyming as well. :)

[Amylian]

Though I cannot work out the true meanings within the poem, it is exquisitely written and fun to read. Its simplicity, however, is kind of a trick.