Thunder

[Dark Muse]

Thunder

Listen to the sound of the distant voice
a voice that is a rolling thunder
as it calls across the mountains
in its wake silence is left
and all is holding still
a breathless moment
when life quivers
exhale
spirits
words

[dibyendra]

Wow, beautiful poem! I really loved it.


a breathless moment
when life quivers
exhale
spirits
words

Great! :thumbs_up

[Dark Muse]

Thank you very much

[qimissung]

"a breathless moment when life quivers..." very evocative line.

[blazeofglory]

This expresses of something what life is at the deepest level.

[Dark Muse]

wow, thank you very much, this poem is a very spiritual one for me.

[white camellia]

Hi, Dark Muse, to me, you have captured the very essence of that sacred moment. I always believed in spiritual words which came that way.

[Dark Muse]

Thank you very much, it means a lot to me