Squinting

[Khe Iem]

SQUINTING

By Khe Iem

swiveling one’s head
rolling one’s feet

accidentally confronting but
keeping silent while

passing through
A town of half-breeds (angered)
punching the air, lost to the world
vast
buttocks, thighs and breasts. Wandering crazily,
confined. The pounding of loosened throats. East and
West. Faces grimacing,

squinting

[qimissung]

a very interesting use of language and of looking at the marginalized. It's good.

[blazeofglory]

This I say is a wonderful experiment with the style of writing poetry.

[Khe Iem]

Thanks. Somebody doesn't understand thi poem. KI

[dibyendra]

SQUINTING

By Khe Iem

swiveling one’s head
rolling one’s feet

accidentally confronting but
keeping silent while

passing through
A town of half-breeds (angered)
punching the air, lost to the world
vast
buttocks, thighs and breasts. Wandering crazily,
confined. The pounding of loosened throats. East and
West. Faces grimacing,

squinting

Ah, what a vibrant expressions! It's really a different poem. I liked it very much. :thumbs_up

[Khe Iem]

Thanks. Khe Iem