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mazHur
07-23-2008, 01:34 PM
Live On and On



scared of death
the eternal truth
the inevitable
'the leveler of all things'
come on, baby,
drink from
the vase of love
and live on
and on
though people
live to die
but many don't
die but to live
forever
in Love's clime!

qimissung
07-23-2008, 01:51 PM
Very clever, mazHUR. 'Come on baby, drink from the vase of love'~I love this line, very quotable!

mazHur
07-23-2008, 02:27 PM
Merci !
Thank You Very Much For Reading And Appreciating My Poem

Cheers!

kgremore
07-23-2008, 03:48 PM
beautiful!

blazeofglory
07-23-2008, 08:40 PM
It has a beauty, and reminding me of some of the middleweight's poets, like the Rubaiyat Omar Khayyam type.