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Pendragon
07-23-2008, 11:22 AM
Moments…

Gone in the space of a moment,
The thought travels the left hemisphere.
Impulse rises like an Autumn Sun,
Tickles me with fan-like fingers
Biding me serve its command.
Am I such a slave to my passion,
Indentured to serve only my pride?
Or can I shrug off this Sisyphus Stone,
Honor becoming the frontrunner again?
“Everything we do and seem,
Is but a dream within a dream…”

Pendragon
© Wednesday, July 23, 2008

Dark Muse
07-23-2008, 11:35 AM
Nice use of Poe at the end there. A beautiful poem with such vivid imagery

blazeofglory
07-23-2008, 08:44 PM
A picturesque presentation, and indeed it has startling metaphors.