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PrinceMyshkin
07-21-2008, 08:30 PM
You sweethearts of the further domains
who go by pseudonyms here
and who knows but that in what
has come to be known as “real life”
the whole of your self is a pseudonym
for your as yet unknown, maybe
never to be known actual self,
that self which you sometimes love
and sometimes hate immoderately
and sometimes love and hate both
in the same unavoidable swoop
of a machete! You sweethearts
of the further domains, whom I encounter
here each morning and read your songs
of love for one another
or of others even more unknown,
your griefs, your triumphs
or puzzlements, it is not only camels
or the very rich who cannot pass
through the eye of the needle
but the most ordinary extraordinary
of us...

You sweethearts of the further domains:
I now salute you, one and all!

firefangled
07-22-2008, 08:22 AM
A passionate salute,
well received, I'm sure,
spirit transcends all barriers,
in the wink of an eye,
what is most noble in us
passes through.

Salute!

blazeofglory
07-23-2008, 08:45 PM
Engagingly touching.

goldenrod
07-23-2008, 10:54 PM
Who is to say that duel realities and personalities are an impossibility? Better this one pertaining to the forum, than the day I have just, mostly spent, in emergency, waiting for a surgeon to gut part of my left foot with a scalpel...with no local anaesthetic yet!:(:(

I find pleasure in your observations, and would return the salute, with the best archaic flourish I can muster...

goldenrod.

PrinceMyshkin
07-24-2008, 06:40 AM
Who is to say that duel realities and personalities are an impossibility? Better this one pertaining to the forum, than the day I have just, mostly spent, in emergency, waiting for a surgeon to gut part of my left foot with a scalpel...with no local anaesthetic yet!:(:(

I find pleasure in your observations, and would return the salute, with the best archaic flourish I can muster...

goldenrod.

I don't know what to say about the ghastly procedure you describe, but evidently that surgeon did not excise your good humour!