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Dark Muse
07-21-2008, 11:34 AM
Dawn A New Day

Spread my wings
and fly away

Shed a tear
and hide away

Close my eyes
and dream a new day

On my knees
begging you to stay

If I could breathe
I'd run away

Never a word
I can say

Spread your wings
and carry me away

Together we will enter
a brand new day

You always know
the words to say

From this world
you'll hide me away

I know in your arms
forever I'll stay.

Pendragon
07-21-2008, 12:16 PM
Very nice. Angel or bird carrying you away? :thumbs_up

Dark Muse
07-21-2008, 12:40 PM
Thank you. Hehe for me it would probably be a sylph to carry me off. Though this poem was written about love

goldenrod
07-21-2008, 01:42 PM
A nice mixture of the competing emotions surrounding love!:(:):(

goldenrod.

Dark Muse
07-21-2008, 02:25 PM
Thank you

blazeofglory
07-23-2008, 08:48 PM
I say it is a bucket of emotions.

Dark Muse
07-23-2008, 09:11 PM
LOL not sure if that is a good thing or a bad thing