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goldenrod
07-19-2008, 04:27 PM
Reverse Echo?


I have this unsettled, eerie feeling,
of having been this way before.
Familiar is the garden,
and I know that old oak door!

The path down to the river,
unseen, a wooden chair.
I'm sure the dock it sits upon,
has rotting boards, and needs repair.

But I live in the city,
my first time to venture forth,
and it's silly to imagine
that I know this place, of course?!

Perhaps, a picture I'm remembering,
from a long lost magazine,
or a trysting place resembling,
in a movie that I've seen?

Subtle hints surrounding me,
stir a memory, not quite recalled.
I anticipate so many sounds,
before, on my ear they fall.

I should feel that it's disquietening,
unhappy in this thrall,
But an inner voice keeps telling me
I'm at peace, So it's not that way, at all!

Is it but a recollection of things
dredged, from an unreal past.
An alternative direction,
that did not come to pass?

I've heard of similar conjectures,
do they call it "deja vu"?
A strong feeling of belonging that,
sudden, comes over you!

Maybe it is addition,
of a totally different sum,
the first faint reverse echo,
of a future, yet to come!


goldenrod.

lucidnightmares
07-19-2008, 08:36 PM
wow
great rhyme scheme
haha not much else to say, this piece blew me away :D

blazeofglory
07-19-2008, 10:06 PM
It has the depth of imagination, deepening indeed. Only a true poet can penetrate so deep.

goldenrod
08-21-2008, 12:08 PM
(lucidnightmares)

Trying to put into words "happenings" which I have never received satisfactory explanations for!

goldenrod.

goldenrod
08-21-2008, 12:12 PM
(blazeofglory)

Thank you, once again "blaze"...when will you be posting your next poem? I have been keeping my eyes peeled...

goldenrod.