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PrinceMyshkin
07-18-2008, 04:41 AM
1)

When you were naked as my words
pretended to be
and I saw that your soul
was in your body like a hand in a glove
that could be retrieved
as easily as my love,

we were students in the same school then
on our way to prove love true
or false.


2)

How poor we are,
when everything that's meant to
carries us as far,
when vagina, penis, heart and mind
work no better than designed.

The only good lesson is the one
we can't, yet must, revise.
The only things we ever learn
are by surprise.

Sweets America
07-18-2008, 07:47 AM
This is so wonderful, Jerry-Shou!!!
This deserves three bananas!! :banana: :banana: :banana:

Honestly, I can say that this poem is part of my favorite ones from you. And if you don't realize how great it is, I'll slap you in the face.

It leaves me breathless.

PrinceMyshkin
07-18-2008, 08:12 AM
And if you don't realize how great it is, I'll slap you in the face.


Slap you RIGHT BACK if you don't have an adequate idea how much I love you!

qimissung
07-18-2008, 10:19 AM
Wow. Great metaphor and a great poem...it took me by surprise.