the first tread...!!!(short story)

[abu_elfeda14]

hello,
this is my first time to write story in english , so -may be- there are some mistakes ...

i need to your opinions and support...

thanks,
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the first tread...!!!

he was climbing the Stairs ... hardly

Sometimes be aware of his Footings ...

And sometimes climb with the other climbers ...

Suddenly he remembered that didn't pass on first tread ...

Perhaps, because someone warned him or he might have forgotten ...

he Decided to return to the first tread ...

But ...

when he return to the first tread ...

he No longer finds the rest treads ...!!!

[Immortall708]

This story is for me about being brave.And to go ahead for keeping our dreams alive.The nice beggining with writing in English.It is normal to make mistakes.Very good authors have peope for protecting their stories from making mistakes.:yawnb: I´m newcomer there.Perhaps, I will make some story myself. But I think your writing will be in future, pretty well.