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Adolescent09
07-16-2008, 10:46 PM
Vicissitude

To

Us

T he Worst

Thing that could happen

To any of us
Is the worst thing that
could happen
To any
one
of
us

TheFifthElement
07-17-2008, 02:06 PM
I enjoyed this Adol, simple yet not so simple. Clever use of the word.

goldenrod
07-17-2008, 03:12 PM
"Ask not for whom the bell tolls"...by any other name..."All for one, and one for all!" In a poetic tradition, so to speak.

goldenrod.

blazeofglory
07-28-2008, 10:16 PM
Enigmatically moving. Something unsaid is said here.

Virgil
07-28-2008, 10:26 PM
Vicissitude

To

Us

T he Worst

Thing that could happen

To any of us
Is the worst thing that
could happen
To any
one
of
us

Adol I think this is brilliant. This is pure form shaping meaning. I'm completely impressed. I hope you are keeping up with your writing. :)