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Pendragon
07-15-2008, 11:59 AM
HE DOESN’T NEED YOU NOW

You never had the time for him,
this child of your desire.
There were always so many things you felt were so much more important.
He tried in so many ways to tell you of the longing he felt,
but his pleas fell upon deaf ears.
Finally, he became so desperate for your attention, that he felt he had no choice,
and the sharp bark of a gun rent the summer night.
At his funeral, you shed a gallon of tears and sobbed about your loss;
and now you haunt his gravestone even though you were seldom in his room.
Your job suffers, you lose much sleep, you long to hold him close—
all noble things:
but he doesn’t need you now…

Dale Harris
©1/7/96

Sarasvati21
07-15-2008, 12:03 PM
Wow...

Pen, that was powerful.

goldenrod
07-15-2008, 01:07 PM
Points out, in more than one way, the lost chances we all miss to a more or lesser degree!

goldenrod.

blazeofglory
07-15-2008, 08:38 PM
Yes, it happens in this world, moments of desperation we live live in.

firefangled
07-15-2008, 09:08 PM
Oh, Pen, sad indeed.

ampoule
07-16-2008, 12:55 AM
Very sad. I can't help but think of "Cat's In the Cradle".

dibyendra
07-16-2008, 01:47 AM
It's so sad poem. It made me want to cry. I had read this poem when you had posted this poem earlier here in LitNet. But, I felt the same strong emotions once again.

tattooed wonder
07-16-2008, 03:05 AM
tragic. I understand that feeling well. Excellent poem

PrinceMyshkin
07-16-2008, 09:51 AM
I feel like the scoffer at the funeral, Pen, but I just don't believe this, don't feel it - and don't altogether believe that you did, either, but rather that you wrote it kind of on automatic pilot.

toni
07-16-2008, 11:45 AM
It was sad and beautiful, Uncle Pen.. :(
One could feel pain and loss in your poem.