"sucker punch!"

[goldenrod]

Altitude! Man! You need altitude!
High above the ground,
above the clouds, looking down,
Rare, air!
Altitude, man!

Altitude! Man! You need attitude!
A shoulder chip,
a mile high!
Dare ya! Knock it off! Make it fly!
Attitude, man!

Spoiling for a fight!
No need, nor sense, of wrong or right!
Mean attitude, man!
Elevate that anger!
Rev it up, a notch or two!

Mean, and I mean!
Mean attitude, dude!


goldenrod.

[ampoule]

Well, from this altitude, I am of the attitude that I like this. Clever. Wondering though, did you mean for the second stanza to begin with altitude or attitude?

[goldenrod]

(ampoule)

Once the "chip on the shoulder is a mile high", you have the altitude for a real mean attitude!:(

goldenrod.