my queen

[jikan myshkin]

cold and heartless
she's my queen
she is the one
who will crush
all my hopes and dreams
idle and bored
she took a razor to her wrists
and then had a long soak
to wash away the stain

[blazeofglory]

cold and heartless
she's my queen
she is the one
who will crush
all my hopes and dreams
idle and bored
she took a razor to her wrists
and then had a long soak
to wash away the stain

A realistic touch!

[ShadowFire]

my gosh...so short but sooooo powerful. I love it. The words are so true. Thank you so much for sharing because it is wonderful.

[jikan myshkin]

thank you guys

[lucidnightmares]

this is a scary one, well for me anyway`s.
very moving and evoked alot in me, a sign of a great piece of art.

[goldenrod]

You'd better do some neck exercises if you are going to carry a mill-stone like that around!:(:)
Good stuff!

goldenrod.

[qimissung]

Wow! I love poems like these-a few words, then WHAM! Good Job.