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PrinceMyshkin

07-10-2008, 06:41 PM

And someone will sing to you,
someone is even now clearing her throat,
running the scales, the words
(who could have known
there’d be so much to chew on in words
or that they’d be so carnal!) - the words
impatiently crowding her voice-box,
each of them declaiming
Me! Me! let me go first!

Jerry Newman © 10Jul08

firefangled

07-11-2008, 12:28 AM

Clever, Prince. Love the voice exercise.

ampoule

07-11-2008, 01:40 AM

Hey, I sang to you once.

me may mah mo mu, me may mah mo mu, me may mah mo mu

red leather yellow leather red leather yellow leather

aluminum linoleum aluminum linoleum aluminum linoleum

nice poem

Umbilical

07-11-2008, 03:39 AM

I was singing while we were conversing, but not to you,
to myself. same deal?

PrinceMyshkin

07-11-2008, 09:55 AM

Clever, Prince. Love the voice exercise.

It may not have been obvious but that one was begat of your last two in their co-habitation.

I was singing while we were conversing, but not to you,
to myself. same deal?

Same or maybe even better per one of the next poems I hope to complete and post.

Hey, I sang to you once.

me may mah mo mu, me may mah mo mu, me may mah mo mu

red leather yellow leather red leather yellow leather

aluminum linoleum aluminum linoleum aluminum linoleum

nice poem

Not that I recall, Red Demon! Although I did get an unplayable CD of songs performed by your choir.

blazeofglory

07-19-2008, 10:32 PM

The good stuff.

Sweets America

07-20-2008, 07:31 AM

I think I am the one who sing like this.

Umbilical

07-20-2008, 08:36 AM

Same or maybe even better per one of the next poems I hope to complete and post.

Singing to myself,
the vibrations tickled your nipples -
better than music, and better than you could do. if I'm gonna sing with ANYONE it's gonna be the voice of someone GIVING IN.

yeAaaaaHhhhh!!

PrinceMyshkin

07-20-2008, 09:19 AM

Singing to myself,
the vibrations tickled your nipples -
better than music, and better than you could do. if I'm gonna sing with ANYONE it's gonna be the voice of someone GIVING IN.

yeAaaaaHhhhh!!

Break up that long last line and you have a poem, one that turns from the contemplatively erotic to the exuberantly so.