I'd Like to Know

[The1TheOnlyJP]

Who made the ocean oh so blue and lonesome?
Why do leaves commit suicide in autumn?
What causes our sky to weep on a lovely day?
How come the stars only gleam when we're all tucked away?

[goldenrod]

The oceans are blue, because there are so few.
Because of what's inside, the leaves commit suicide!
On a lovely day, all that wet, is sweat!
When we're tucked away in bed, they only seems to gleam...

And...I would not have written the above without having read your poem!


goldenrod.

[goldenrod]

The oceans are blue, because there are so few.
Because of what's inside, the leaves commit suicide!
On a lovely day, all that wet, is sweat!
When we're tucked away in bed, they only seem to gleam...

And...I would not have written the above without having read your poem!


goldenrod.

[goldenrod]

Posted twice!
My reply isn't worth a onecer, let alone a twoster!!!!

goldenrod.

[blazeofglory]

So beautifully written and a poem in fact is just a piece of imagination and here the poet imagines things deeply.