every moment leaves behind a smile...

[lucidnightmares]

i wish to write, of beauty and of you
but it`s hard to think about something,
i cannot seem to get thoughts through
as they all flow back to you

the rivers and streams of my shallow muse
all creep slowly towards the inevitable
i guess our minds may be infused
but my guessing just comes back to you

guessing what your thinking
what`s on your pretty mind?
and my soaring thoughts are sinking
all falling back to you

and yet i know you`ll catch them
arms open like petals of a rose catching the rain
the storm of my world is fading , leaving behind a gem
a gem most precious, filled with the memories you left

nothing more could a life desire
than to look back upon itself with a smile
and my world will reach ever higher
until the heavens await below

and when you leave, my world will fall
into a heaven of remembrance
calming a worldly squall
an eternity of memories is all i require...

[ShadowFire]

I like this one too...you write very well. I love the forth stanza. It is filled with such imagetry and beauty, with the rose, rain, gem, and all. It really caught me and froze me for a second. Thank you so much for sharing this one...it is very nice.

[ampoule]

It is good to have someone to make us smile. You have some nice lines here.

[kelby_lake]

i wish to write, of beauty and of you

i don't know why but i just really like that line

[goldenrod]

Your poem reminds me that there are some good reasons for being alive and taking chances!

goldenrod.

[lucidnightmares]

thanks alot everyone
this is kind of an important piece to me so your encouragement really means alot to me

[blazeofglory]

This stuff is something that speaks lots of what the stuff love is in substance.