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Avalive
12-23-2004, 05:44 AM
Why my pen is restless on idiocy
The litany of being a star that never shines
Sleep beneath a nameless tomb
You want to feel the beat in my chest and follow?
Poetry is the thorns of insanity
The power that only revisits the wounds
Wear the copper armor with beauty
To be the Thor that is immortal
How a poem is cried out?
It's the ciggar burns itself in a smoky mouth
The rouge kisses on the russet cheecks
Or a lovely bug naps on a fallen twig
It's how heaven lives upon the Earth
And the ocean embrace its bay
The poetry has legs that climb on clouds
It flows itself from a fearless mind
That can not brace itself

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amuse
12-24-2004, 03:01 PM
really effective with the picture!
i like these lines:

The litany of being a star that never shines

Poetry is the thorns of insanity
The power that only revisits the wounds

The poetry has legs that climb on clouds

Helga
12-24-2004, 06:08 PM
it's so good! I always enjoy reading your work...

Avalive
01-01-2005, 07:19 AM
Thank you guys, a lot