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Schizo-Manic
07-01-2008, 02:06 PM
Covenant with the intellect surgical vertical bio-chemically infecting every molecule
Every specimen evangelistically performing lobotomies disenfranchising the economy
Like the bush organization, abandon this nation desolation disorientation
What about the inhabitant's proclamation
Existence no form of independence no unification as a whole mentally molested
Global, financial depression, times are changing monopolization circulating


The Prologue for Revelation
Terminating this population disorganization overshadowing society frustrations
Intrigued by the medication started evaluating like a neurologist the nerve of this
Legislative system getting away with brutal assassinations
No prescription no vindication for liberating
Whatever happened to constructing, rational thinking, teaching the children the next generation?
However, we have grown accustomed to this incapacitated educational system


The prognosis the hypnosis over dosage experimented captivated the moment
Psychologically digging deep in the soul like fossils in anthropology
Releasing toxins altering peoples bio-chemistry taking away their assessments
Ask yourself one question: Who is to blame for HIV inauguration the corporation
Responsible for petroleum inflation? It's evident the predicament that were in
The origin of this country family tree is invidious fortified in corruption insidiously
Veiling the factuality's of my history
The beast unleashed exterminating all minorities
Eliminating the next generation no form of invigoration no emancipation
Total devastation psychologically dead populace


Suicidal psychosis cerebral erosion below thirty degrees celsius psychologically frozen
Righteousness the antidote against poisonous contamination exploitation this nation
No signs of vaccinations similar to starvation, eventually we are going to be feeding off
Each other, an unconventional form of cannibalism born the government calls it patriotism, therefore, what do we have? Another act of racism sexism pessimism no optimism practicing indifferent methods of escapism


This nation preconceived filled with calamities govern by ungodliness retrospectively
Reflecting back to the days of Adam & Eve
America how does it feel to be a nudist?
Covering yourself up with corrupted garments the pinnacle of injustice
Inconceivability veils the optics obsessed with material objects provisional fabrics
Degenerating periodically simultaneously destroying health inevitably exposed to the Diabolical asylum of death


Volcanic explosions commence traveling internally through the cerebellum chemically
Diagnosed with erosions filled with lethal Trojan Horses infrastructure poisoned
Occupation of an architect transforming the surface underneath the soul like a podiatrist
Open minded like a psychiatrist viewing the world through my psychosomatics optics
Who will investigate the blasphemy of this society under one god we trust
Hypothetically speaking in tongues, is it just one god, how many devils have you
Controlled by capitalism practiced by governmental scientist destroying democratically
The ideologies of gratification inserting artificial intelligence within the phrenological
Perimeter diminishing mankind existence


Would you sacrifice for benevolence or indulge in malevolence?

Derrick Wilkins 6/28/08

Virgil
07-01-2008, 02:19 PM
This is pretty bad, both as poetry and as political diatribe. I thought we weren't supposed to get political on lit net.

Leabhar
07-02-2008, 02:51 AM
It is good for an insane political poem, especially if you're trying to convey an insane world.

Schizo-Manic
08-01-2008, 04:47 PM
This is pretty bad, both as poetry and as political diatribe. I thought we weren't supposed to get political on lit net.

I wasn't trying to be political this was actually recorded for my album I plan on releasing this fall.

check out my work
www.myspace.com/unonationenterprise

I am a music producer this was something I just needed to get off my chest so I decided to write...

appreciate the feedback

peace

blazeofglory
08-01-2008, 09:23 PM
I wasn't trying to be political this was actually recorded for my album I plan on releasing this fall.

check out my work
www.myspace.com/unonationenterprise

I am a music producer this was something I just needed to get off my chest so I decided to write...

appreciate the feedback

peace

I find a myths in your writing, a beauty in your expression. I think it cascades from your heart and inundates all of us. Maybe as a music producer you are capable of writing so rhythmically. The problem is with us, we formalists, prosaic dry writers. We seek too much of formality, pruning, brushing, redirecting the natural course of expression. We censor them notwithstanding the fact that there is a beauty, something natural and intense there. Yours is a wave of imagination, a mix of some diverse disciplines. I am really thrilled to read.

This world is not only for formalists, purists, specialists but for amateurs also. I do not mean you are one. You are mature, impeccable and if some so called formalists who think they have command over the language or the style critique it do not not be disheartened at all. This world is a big place and there are all sorts of people you will not run short of friends to give you company.