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kelby_lake
07-01-2008, 07:54 AM
I don't like love poems
They bore me through and through
Yet now I'm reading every one
For i'm in love with you

Kafka's Crow
07-01-2008, 08:27 AM
Wow! You are 'reading' them? I'm bl00dy writing them, I who couldn't stand them up until now! Beautiful little poem kelby!

goldenrod
07-01-2008, 10:35 AM
Ah! now you know "what love has to do with it!" Neat...:)


goldenrod.

blazeofglory
07-01-2008, 10:59 AM
It is interesting in the manner every great poem is. The size does not matter. What matters is the content here, very crisp, retrenched and indeed impeccably direct. Of course in presenting the depth of the feeling the poet succeeds. For he veers to the end wherein one can feel the intensity.

ampoule
07-01-2008, 11:18 AM
I don't like love poems
They bore me through and through
Yet now I'm reading every one
For i'm in love with you

kelby....a perfect little poem.

kelby_lake
07-01-2008, 04:32 PM
Aw, thanks :)

firefangled
07-01-2008, 08:25 PM
I don't like love poems
They bore me through and through
Yet now I'm reading every one
For i'm in love with you

What a dear poem.