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symphony
06-25-2008, 03:52 AM
:D :D :D

Okay I still have 2 exams left, but they're on 3rd and 6th of July and it does feel like my exams are over! And I decided I've been away long enough! :D
Did I miss much? :)



And I also thought I'd drop this by:



Ever after

The stories continue. There the child stirs
and turns in sleep, beyond the gold-edged myths
and purple pages, beyond the mother’s
rhythmic voice, beyond betweens, beneaths.


The morning’s argent maiden muslin ray
pulls the mythoi back to worldlinesses,
the crystal senses of this world assay
a different yarn. Known stories, known faces


remain, repeat, resay the said, repay
the paid, refind what has never been lost,
live lives again, and die again to stay,
to sing the songs that have been sung the most.


Here, I lie bound to the sleep of this hour.
Myths, they pass by, now, and ever after.

Virgil
06-25-2008, 06:58 AM
I don't know what you missed, but I missed you. ;) I noticed you ween't around. Welcome back. :) That's a good poem Symph.

schadenfreude
06-25-2008, 07:17 AM
Welcome back Symphony! I like your poem, except for the line "live lives again" which seems to be repeating the same thing twice. But apart from that, your descriptions are very nice. Good luck for your exams!

ampoule
06-25-2008, 08:06 AM
Symphony, it is very good to 'see' you. Your poem is wonderful. I love the way it reads, especially when it is whispered.

symphony
06-25-2008, 12:52 PM
Thankee, all. :D

goldenrod
06-25-2008, 03:01 PM
Did I hear a symphony?

Welcome baaack!


goldenrod.

PrinceMyshkin
06-25-2008, 04:13 PM
"Whispered," said Ampoule, I rather think it should be sung or recited in a proud bardic voice if a female, especially a stripling, can be said to have a bardic voice!