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Tarquin
06-18-2008, 01:13 PM
D isolving in a pit of agony, I'm slipping out of
life and falling into myself. Detaching parts
of my life.

E xtracting selected memories from deep
within, sorting through my sorrows, and
pain.

P lunging into my made up world, where
everything is how I wish it, everything
is in my own mind.

R ecalling lost promises, floating in the
dark. Reaching out to them, but I can
never catch the words.

E ndagering my life to that of lonelyness,
and friendship is no more, I'm in danger
of losing myself.

S adness overtakes me, this adventures
nearing end. It controls me in a way
that doesn't make me, me.

S ongs play, the background of my life,
their words mean little to me, like mine
mean little to you.

E ndless suffering I feel within me, I
don't know why this is but I need to
Isolate myself

D etached eyes look out from my body,
can you see, that there's no one inside?
it feels like my whole life was a lie.

goldenrod
06-18-2008, 02:50 PM
Within the constraint of being "depressed" you did a pretty good job!:(

goldenrod.

Tarquin
06-18-2008, 09:59 PM
Thank you, very much.