~Stormy Weather~

[OceanSoul]

I don't do a whole lot of poetry...lol. tThis is just something I did the other day--

Stormy Weather

The shining sun is like the spirit of a child
Low, time doth carry on
And cumulus and nimbos blot the venmilion sun away
Lightening flashes, thunder tolls the coming of the rain
And falls it well on the tender soul,
Amid skies of gray
The sun semeth to be vanished, forever
But with the rising wind the storm fades
And the sun will shine through once again

[amuse]

Very, very nice.

[mono]

Beautiful piece, OceanSoul. I love your use of simile and metaphor; and through such a verbose manner (but in a very good, descriptive way, honestly!), all of the words and structure form a stunning poem. Well done!