A Werewolf In Full Moon

[formality hater]

A Werewolf In Full Moon


The moon came from its hideout,
And I howled!
The stars didn't light the skyway,
And I howled!
I saw your face in outer space,
And I howled!
You glared at me through the moonlight,
And I howled!
The rain broke the silent night,
And I howled!
I smiled...and you scowled,
And I howled!
You ran away with fright,
And I howled...
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What do you think about this one, guys?;)

[Tuninks]

Repetition can prove to be a powerful tool in poetry, yet this was a bit over used. Also, you struggled a little too much to make rhyme. I can see the emotion you are trying to convey, but its on the other side of the room. Try move to bridge that gap with an informal, open poem.

[goldenrod]

I think it is a howler!:)

goldenrod.