Patients

[Ceahorse]

Patients

She hid beneath the soft dark mask,
But her affability prevailed in revealing her.

He saw the caring mother pat the child's head,
As the plesant words flowed through the wire.

He took the watch from his pocket,
The time passes fast, but plentyful.

:thumbs_up ???

[subterranean]

A "hanging" poem ?! I don't really see any essence :).

[mono]

Very discrete and dark . . . 'mysterious' seems the word I seekk, but in an interesting, intriguing way. I like the random descriptions that jump from place-to-place, and how some appear more in-depth than others. Well done.

[Ceahorse]

THanks for the replies..

Sub,, what is a "hanging" poem.. im very new to the literature life.

Mono.. thanks .. i like to hear that someone enjoyed it, plus your right about the in-depthness variation.

the only people i expect to see the images clearly is me and her,, well "She"