Even more than sex

[PrinceMyshkin]

Even more than sex
I want to be talking with a lover!
Do you remember
what it was like to talk with a lover
in the several stages of your romance?

Those first word for which
you hardly had the breath:
Are you you. I mean,
are you really, really you,
can you possibly be as wonderful
as you seem to be? And will you
love me? I mean, will you
love me?

And then that first post-coital
conversation, the unuttered
Was it good for you? Was it
the best you ever had? Did you feel me,
truly feel me
inside you/enclosing you?

Did your heart stop?
Did your mind stop
going chuga-chuga this and
chuga-chuga that?

Did you visit Heaven
and then return because
earth, here, was much better than that?
Oh baby! Oh lover! Oh
John or Jane...

[Sweets America]

Thank you so much for this, you uttered the words of my heart.

[goldenrod]

Man! there are several ways to open a discussion regarding various aspects of this poem, but, in doing so, I might reveal a little too much about myself!;)

goldenrod.

[Virgil]

So many cliches, Prince.

[Sweets America]

So many cliches, Prince.

Perhaps, but this is how Jer and I feel, and how we tend to be disappointed and sad in the end. Maybe we're just naive...

[Umbilical]

Love it 'cause I want it.

[wagravity]

awesome

[Virgil]

I guess Prince has a harem. :p :lol: Actually I'm quite jealous. You'll have to tell me how you do it. :D

[Sarasvati21]

I thought that may have been why you were scolding for cliches, Virgil. ;)

Nicely done, Prince.

[amanda_isabel]

Well written, Uncle Jer, as always :D