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blazeofglory
06-08-2008, 02:07 AM
You know why I am here
To share something that cascades from me
For I fear being abandoned
I have spurts of powerful emotions and ideas
Awaiting disposal
To inundate your arable mind
Or else I will dry up in a desert of aloofness and inertness

I, notwithstanding waves of egos, am unfilled without you
Live drained, marooned timelessly.
For you defined me and confined me within a veil of love and understanding.

Not that I am meek, and not that I am solid
I am fluid, and freeze at times,
If you do not warm me I stagnate in the coldness of eternity

Individuality? This is a bunch of egos
A snow ball
Your love and relationship is a powerful ray of sunlight
That melts me to be immersed into you.

I am stranded here and get lost all alone
And this poem is addressed to you
And this affirmatively concretize our relationship

goldenrod
06-08-2008, 09:48 AM
Your poem distills one of the basic truths of the human condition. The senses relate in a magical way with the one(s) we love and whose love we desperately need in return.

Have I expressed this badly?

goldenrod.

blazeofglory
06-08-2008, 08:32 PM
No friend, I get you here and elsewhere expressing your ideas very perfectly.

You always inspire all here